What was the saddest moment in your whole life?
by Eric Paul Monroe on Feb.19, 2010, under Virtual Classroom
Please explain to the best of your ability. Your content should vividly reflect the emotional state you were in at the time to the reader.
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March 26th, 2010 on 04:22
I used to crying when I talked about my saddest moment but it happened on the past so I don’t have to crying anymore. Well, when I was a child my parents were planning to get divorced
you know the reasonsbecause my father cheated to my mom. My parents didn’t live together, sometimes mi father went to visit us, but he didn’t visit us frequently.I remember it was my sister’s birthday and my father went to the party, which my mother organized to her. We were having a good time but suddenly the lover of my father arrived to the house. And all my uncles started to scream and they told her, got out of my house. My sister started to cry and my mother gets very angry, I was whit my uncle and I were crying too. I can´t forget that moment
,and I remember what she was wearing.May 28th, 2010 on 17:28
I think I was fourteen years old when it happened. I had a cat and she gave birth to four kittens. At that timepunctuation no one neutered pets in Russia, so it was quite normal to have your cat pregnant from time to time and got rid of definite article kittens right after their birth. Usually men in the family were in charge of it and they were doing it secretly. But this time my father was traveling and my mother and me decided that we’re going to keep the kittens. Unfortunatelypunctuation my cat didn’t have milk to feed her babies and right after she gave birth she left them. I still can’t understand why did it happen, but her mother’s instinct didn’t work. I was trying to feed them, but the only milk I could find was conserved milk (which they could not digest), because it was wintertime and we were living in Siberia. My kittens were so tiny and defenseless and they were crying from hunger. My heart was breaking from pity, I could not help them. It was like a nightmare, they were slowly dying. After I found out that my classmate had a cat, which had kittens two months earlier, I brought the last kitten to her place hoping that the cat would feed him – it didn’t work. I still feel so much pain when I’m thinking about this.
June 16th, 2010 on 18:01
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